Talk:Mercenaries/@comment-12952880-20140730162729

I should note that war will still have to be declared for any offensive action, even if it's at the behest of another faction.

The codex eeds a section on alliances and truces. If the faction doesn't do either of those that still needs to be specified. You also need to specify how members advance in the factions' ranks.

You're also still missing the following requirements:

-A defined judicial process for offenders of faction law

-A defined process for determining property rights of members

- A defined process for the admission of new members to the faction